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Dogs of War
All my life I wanted to make a difference in life. I wanted to be the change. But being the change means you have to step on some toes, get your hands dirty, or snuffing a life.
"Cry 'Havoc!', and let slip the dogs of war."- Act III Julius Caesar, written by William Shakespeare.
Chapter 1:
My name is Choi Park. I'm 19 years old and have went though rigorous training to be in the His Majesty's Royal Police of Neo Tokyo. We are called Dogs. I have trained hard for four years for this.
I have been assigned to Senor Police Officer Junai Hunter. She has been part of this for 2 years. She has pulled in many criminals. Her official record is 40 criminals. Again....that's official. Rumor is that she has brought in over 100 criminals. I was lucky to be assigned to her.
Japan, after the war of 2034, had changed. The districts are now divided into areas. Ward #1 is also called central. This is where his Majesty resides. Also the army. With America losing its grip on Japan, we now have an official army. Ward #2 is the rich floozies who don't understand that life is tough. The toughest and roughest Sector is Ward #11. 11 is nicknamed GrimeScene. This is where the dirt and scum reside. This is where I am assigned. This is where I grew up.
I am Korean by birth, but Tokyo is my home. My family was killed in the war. Orphaned, I lived on the streets. When I was 13 I was picked up for stealing. Instead of putting me is the camp for wayward children, the Commissioner General, the man above all officers, took me in, though the protests of officers and even his wife.
I am on my way to meet Junai at the station. I am nervous I must admit. I don't know what to expect.
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I walk into the station. This place is not as nice as Ward 1, but the people here are the hard working of all the Dogs. Because of my Lord Commissioner General, they get acknowledgment when it is due.
“Good Morning, I am looking for Senior Officer Hunter.”
The man at the desk smirked. He looked like a Dog who was taken off the streets years ago.
“You're new arent you. Here unless the Commissioner is here, we are called Dogs. Senior Dog Hunter or Hunter will suffice. And you are?”
“Officer Park.”
“Tired of riding the Commissioner skirts huh? Why did you pick the Grime to patrol?”
Right about now I was tired of being interrogated.
“Thank you for your help. I will find her myself.”
“Now don't get your panties in a twist. Michelle. Show him to Dog Hunter's desk.”
A little petite woman who looked like she had no business even being here walked me Hunter's desk. She must have taken a fancy to me because she kept smiling at me. I took everything in me not to be sarcastic and cruel. Being with the Commissioner for a long time will bring that out of you. You also get sick of stupid woman. The Commissioner's wife for one. Finally we made it to Dog Hunter's desk. She wasn't there though.
“You can wait here.” Michelle said. She smiled and walked off.
I looked at my surroundings. I have been to all the ward's stations. This one can be described as a well oiled machine. They have to run it that way. The motto down here is the old Shakespeare saying, “Cry Havoc, and let slip the dogs of war.” We have to keep order here. Lose our power and ground here, we lose Tokyo.
“Park?”
I looked up. I saw a woman of about 5'7 in street clothes.. She was not Japanese, or if she was it was back in the line. She looked to be black American possible. She had a sweet face, a nice body. The most striking feature was her eyes. Amber. She didn't look tough. But I knew better then to assume she wasn't.
“Yes.”
“Yes Ma'am, Or Dog Hunter. I am your superior.”
She was so nice about it, but under her tone she seemed dangerous. I swallowed my gum.
“Yes Ma'am. Sorry ma'am.”
“That's quite alright. So Puppy Park. You are stuck with me so it seems. You know the rules. Don't speak unless spoken to, and stay out of the way. I patrol the Kabukicho. It's dangerous and court of the Hellion is there. He took over all thievery in Tokyo. With the Yakuza extinct Hellion has it all. I know his court personally so keep you eyes open. If we can get bribes 10% goes to us and the rest goes to his majesty. Its not fair but that's the way it is.”
No wonder she was one of the best. She knew her stuff. She looked down at her watch.
“Let's go puppy. We have to get you reacquainted with the neighborhood.”
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Kabukicho District. The most dangerous place in Tokyo. That what we were patrolling. Only today because I am new we patrol during the day. After this we will patrol at night. Night watch is from 21:00-7:00hrs. This time is when everything pops off. Rapes, Crimes, and the likes. Those things use to be in check when the Hellion was young. Now that he is old and careless, nothing is in check. Many rumors are said that he will probably be overthrown and a new Hellion will reign in his place.
Junai decide we would walk there. Kabukicho is about one mile away. Before we left the station, Junai checked in with the Captain Inspector. Telling him our objectives and how we will patrol today but tomorrow we will patrol at our regular hours. The Captain Inspector was an old guy name Mashiro Kanoyagi. He was knonw for his toughness with the dogs of Ward 11. But he was the best. And the best were here in this section.
We left the station and began walking. Hunter didn't speak very much. She wasn't like most woman I have met. Not chatty, which I find different. Its a nice change though. We are not issued guns. Though we practice with them in the stations, guns are outlawed in Tokyo. After the war the government did a through search of all the guns. From statistics there are only 1% of guns in Tokyo. Only the army are allowed to carry guns. So Junai and I wear the dog tags, the collar to protect again a knife cut to the next, protective gloves, a standard issue baton, and 3 knives in sheaves. Of course Junai has more because of her rank.
After 20 minutes of walking we get there. Kabukicho District.
“This should be a walk in the part.” Hunter comments.
We walk into the district. Everyone seem to stop what the are doing and watch us walk. Hunter does not seem phased by this. In fact she said Good Morning to every she walks pass. She stops at a Teriyaki Chicken seller and kisses the old lady behind the cart. I know Mrs. Shinji but she always forgets me. Old timer's.....or is it Alzheimer's.
“Juni! What are you doing patrolling here this morning.”
“I'm training the puppy. His name is Park.
“Puppy Park eh. I knew a woman name Park. She was a nice woman. She died before the war. She had a boy who should be about your age.”
“Its me Mrs Shinji. Choi?”
“Oh Lordy my eyes aren't so good. So you joined the Dogs. Stick with Juni here and things will always go right.”
Juni...I mean Hunter, smiled and bid a good day to the old lady.
We walked on in silence until she said,
“Puppy. What do you see?”
I looked closely. Then I caught it. A pickpocket. I got out my baton, but very quickly Hunter took it from me put my Baton back into its holder.
“First, the victim is rich. See his clothing. He didn't get it here in the Grime, so he can afford to lose some dough. Second, the pickpocket is a child. Third, you don't want to be in front of a Judge unless you have to. And Forth, That was you six years ago. Dont forget it.”
What she said hurt worst than if she slapped me. She was so soft spoken with her rebuke but it hit home. I wish I had understood that before.
“That is why you train with Senior Officers. Mistakes are understandable.”
We walked on Fabuki street. While on it we passes Sakura street. It was guarded by two men. Both had swords and knives. The road they guarded had cherry blossom tree lined up on each side until you get to a Pagoda house. This had no place being in the Grime.
“Good Morning, Jack? Anaki?” Hunter said.
They both just gruffed. They seemed to have respect for her.
“This is the road of Hellion. Do not go in unless you are with me. You will not get out.”
“I understand Hunter.”
She smiled. The thing about her is, she is in the most dangerous district and she smiles. Its so unnerving. Why is she so happy?
She looked ahead.
“Puppy what do you see?”
“A man in his 30's, 5'9, drunk, beating a woman.”
“We don't like getting into domestic affairs. But since they made the affair public, they are disturbing his majesty's peace. Puppy fetch.”
I run to the scene. The woman's face is bleeding now.
“Stop in his Majesty's name.”
The drunk man looked at me.
“Dis isssh my wifessh and sssshee sheating on me!” he yelled.
I hit him in the head with my baton. There is a certain part of the head you hit to knock them out. He fell on the ground. I heard in the background a whistle. Taking out my hand cuff, I cuffed his arms and waited for help. Two men came and took him away. They also gave me a new pair of cuffs.
“Good job puppy.” Hunter said with a smile.
We finished our patrol and got some food for lunch. We did another round before the end of our shift. As we walked we passed Hellion's court. The black man, Jack came up to Hunter.
“His majesty wants to speak with you.”
“He will have to wait until tomorrow. Me and the Puppy will be here for night watch.” Hunter said.
He stared at her for a span of seconds until he yielded. How does she do that? As we walked on I had to ask.
“Ma'am. How do you control people as easily as you do? How do you smile all the time and still have the respect?”
Hunter smiled.
“Well its nice to see that you do talk. I started here when I was a pup like you. I have patrolled her for a long time so the people know me. You will understand the longer you are here.”
We finished our round and reported to the next Dog's rolling in. After that we walked back to the station.
“Ok Puppy. Today was easy. Tomorrow night, not so easy. If you follow my directions everything will be fine. Now on Night-shift we have three Dogs instead of two. I believe Marques Orion will be joining us. His partner retired so unless things change, and they can, he will be with us. Goodnight.”
I said goodbye and walked away. I went into the station to sign in, then I left and got into my car. I am very nervous what tomorrow will bring me. I have heard of Marques Orion. He is an officer who places both sides of the law sometimes. But because he is just as good as Hunter, they haven't gotten rid of him.




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